Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Sold #3

  I placed my palms together to greet her, then I remember the city lesson I have learned, and let, y hands fall back in my lap as I watch her thread her way through the crowd." she already starting to be like city foke why is she forced to call uncle husband in this book that not her husband she a minor, why should she be rewired for calling that her husband?... "City ways “there are a bunch or women by the train lifting there skirts and men are throwing flowers at then little Lakshmi is setting there about to pee her self because of how nervous she is.
    now she’s at her work place this old fat hag of a lady pinched Lakshmi in between her eyebrow and Lakshmi didn’t do any thing at this point she home sick she rally wants to go home she knows no one she doesn’t feel safe at all and she about be rape in a way but that another story talk to later ..........:*

Thursday, November 3, 2011

Sold #2

“They laughter and giggled and began to speak in a different language from mine and auntie left I ask the man when will I see auntie again he said late"     this made me think that this girl is helpless in her life because she’s at the age of 13 and now she gets SOLD in to this life or sex and drugs so ii would never like too get put in a problem like that that is very deep if you think about it just because your family has no money I guess its what they do make the girls suffer from there financial problems out .
      Life is not what it seems to be at all for young women like the girl in my book.
-well bye for now